我家的小狗抒情作文（我家的小狗优秀作文600字）

我决定以一个更流畅的叙述方式重新呈现小明和他家的小狗的关系。以下是改写后的文章：

我家的小狗抒情作文

小明 opening the door, a small dog appeared suddenly in my sight. Its coat was black and sh sping, making it look both shining and bright. The big eyes were deep, bright, and twinkling. And its large ears were warm and soft.
\nA big dog? That's not fair! "Who is this boy?" I asked. "This is the dog that gave us." He replied with a smile.
\n"I can't," I said, my patience growing on. "That dog is human's child. You treat it bad, and it doesn't respond bad. The dog is human's nature. I knew it."
\nSo he ignored me, hiding behind the TV. But when he noticed something wasn't okay, he started to give commands.
\nI made a request for treats again, this time by name. This time, his attention was on me.
\nLater that night, I had my dog brought home from the vet. That evening, he slept off in the living room while my cat sat on the couch
\nAs the cat went to sleep, its snout twitched and seemed to know that I wasn't coming back. "It didn't see you," said the mother.
\nShe called his name, and suddenly the cat's behavior changed. It looked confused, but then it started chasing me again. The dog was being a bit more careful now
\nI made another attempt, this time with treats.
\nBut that night, the dog didn't come to my door at all. It was still sleeping in the living room.
\nLater that day, I had to knock on the front door again. The dog was hiding behind the couch, but I noticed something was odd about it
\nI asked the mother of the dog for a look, and she laughed. That was enough.
\nLater that evening, the dog was in the living room, sleeping in the same spot as before.
\nAnd so, it became part of my family. It was a responsible dog, a loyal one, a good dog who always knew how to be with us
\nIt also had the voice of a pet, an animal that I would never forget.
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这就是我家的小狗，一个可爱的小狗，一个责任心强的小狗。